My contributions to the film are as follows:
- Wrote a script that they didn't use (see live blog).
- Gave comments to the guy who wrote the script, basically amounting to "This makes no actual sense. That might be a problem." I said this as constructively as possible. To his credit, the guy changed the end of the script to make everything intentionally a joke as opposed to unintentionally a joke, which was an improvement.
- Procured props and costumes and gave actresses a ride to the shooting site.
- Got pizza.
And here's the result:
YouTube Link: Armed to the Teeth
I hope that these folks keep together and make new things. The encouraging sign was that the director said to me afterward "You were right about the writing process." As I had warned, all of the noise in the room wasn't productive, and the director wound up choosing a fully written script as I had advocated. I can live with the fact that he didn't choose mine, even though I'd obviously disagree with which script was better. Maybe if they work together again they'll make steps towards putting together a coherent, well thought out project. But this will only happen if they're able to view their own work and process with enough objectivity.
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